The story skipped ahead here and got confusing. If she left a voicemail, then how is he responding? Where is she going and who with? Lots of questions. Overall, though, the story was a successful response to the prompt to reveal a secret.
The story skipped ahead here and got confusing. If she left a voicemail, then how is he responding? Where is she going and who with? Lots of questions. Overall, though, the story was a successful response to the prompt to reveal a secret.
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